Very cute and, again, fun glog! I like how you clearly labelled every paragraph with the titles of stories, making it easier to follow. In my opinion, your thesis statement is really good, but next time be careful of the text colour...white text on white background makes it hard to read. Same with some of the other text boxes, and maybe make the title stand out more?
Your intro made me feel as if my childhood is connected to your composition, so definitely a success! :)
Hi Paula.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry, but Coquitlam is in the Mountain Time Zone, which means that your project arrived an hour (and one second) too late!
Very cute and, again, fun glog! I like how you clearly labelled every paragraph with the titles of stories, making it easier to follow. In my opinion, your thesis statement is really good, but next time be careful of the text colour...white text on white background makes it hard to read. Same with some of the other text boxes, and maybe make the title stand out more?
ReplyDeleteYour intro made me feel as if my childhood is connected to your composition, so definitely a success! :)
your blog was very pretty, and its was very detailed.
ReplyDeleteI think your thesis is really good..:)